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Submitted on: May 12, 2012
Image Size: 245 KB
Resolution: 600×600
Submitted with: Sta.sh

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Critique by ~strawberry-jam-lover May 12, 2012, 11:28:55 AM

I absolutely love the idea of this one, but I would suggest doing the picture with a deeper depth of field. The colors are great with the material (or whatever it is) that you used to put them on, but it would be nice to actually see what the jar and stars pouring out of it are on. If I may, I would recommend doing this picture again, but increasing your depth of field so it's focused on more than just one portion of the photo. Other than that, this picture has great composition and is absolutely gorgeous, especially with the colors of the stars. The idea is awesome, too (:

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Critique by ~TillNoMore May 12, 2012, 11:01:28 AM

I'm not sure if you are trying to focus on the jar too, but I would focus on part of the jar lid as well as the majority of the stars. I would also put it on a different cloth or what ever material you used. Maybe a white cloth with a little light coming through because it might look better if the picture was a little lighter with something like sunlight or to make it bright and happy. But if not, please do not take my critique personally I'm just thinking of ideas and things like that. That's my personal opinion and to me, you did very well! I don't want to hurt anyone's feelings! I hope I wasn't too harsh on you! Please critique and comment on my photos at my deviantart account. Thank you and overall you did very well!