Well this is my first critique, so if it is "Un-Fair" please forgive me. I hope this critique will be fair.
[VISION] This is a very cute photograph honestly speaking. The way you portray their personalities are really adorable. Like how the bottom ones are squished thus getting that >o< face, or the angry face. And this really shows how a marshmallow will "act" if they get faces. Because the expression you gave them depends on where they stand and how they feel.
[ORIGINALITY] Well all of us know that this idea is getting pretty old isn't it? But we all have to say- the idea is still cute and slightly fresh! For those who seen these for the first time will think it is still "adorbz".
[TECHNIQUE] I'm not a good photographer. So I don't photograph things. However, I could tell you have photoshopped other things then the faces ( or is it markers? ) Well I like the action you used for this, the very cool and simple feel it gives? And focusing on the main marshmallow really attracted me to the marshmallows. I have a habit of looking at the background first.
[IMPACT] I am pretty okay with everything but this is too adorable ( like all the other marshmallow pictures ) not to say "Aww" to. So I guess it is a great impact. --- Overall I think this is a cute and simple piece. How can someone not say "Aww"? I guess a grumpy old man can even smile. Maybe.
this is my first critique so be nice this drawing is very good you used different colors and all i love the way how you do the smily on the smarsmallow i think that all people enjoy your picture cause that picture what you draw it it looks really darn cute and i really see that you spend on time with this i think really that you become a good artist in my opinion really you can draw very good it looks so cool that people just looked cause its awesome how you draw it and it is so cute for me you get a five stars for that picture ^^
[VISION]
This is a very cute photograph honestly speaking.
The way you portray their personalities are really adorable.
Like how the bottom ones are squished thus getting that >o< face, or the angry face.
And this really shows how a marshmallow will "act" if they get faces. Because the expression you gave them depends on where they stand and how they feel.
[ORIGINALITY]
Well all of us know that this idea is getting pretty old isn't it?
But we all have to say- the idea is still cute and slightly fresh!
For those who seen these for the first time will think it is still "adorbz".
[TECHNIQUE]
I'm not a good photographer. So I don't photograph things.
However, I could tell you have photoshopped other things then the faces ( or is it markers? )
Well I like the action you used for this, the very cool and simple feel it gives?
And focusing on the main marshmallow really attracted me to the marshmallows.
I have a habit of looking at the background first.
[IMPACT]
I am pretty okay with everything but this is too adorable ( like all the other marshmallow pictures ) not to say "Aww" to.
So I guess it is a great impact.
---
Overall I think this is a cute and simple piece.
How can someone not say "Aww"?
I guess a grumpy old man can even smile.
Maybe.
this drawing is very good you used different colors and all
i love the way how you do the smily on the smarsmallow
i think that all people enjoy your picture cause that picture what you draw it it looks really darn cute and i really see that you spend on time with this
i think really that you become a good artist in my opinion
really you can draw very good it looks so cool that people just looked
cause its awesome how you draw it
and it is so cute
for me you get a five stars for that picture ^^
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